Wednesday, March 23, 2011

Honor Haikus

Honor is valor
Honor is about strength and pride
We should be honor

Ancient families
Silver haired elders and friends
Red blood stains our lives

Brutus was honor
Honorable opinions
He no longer is

-Perry The Platypus
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5 comments:

  1. Julius CaesarMarch 28, 2011 at 2:22 PM

    This is Dr. Dufensmurch... i will get you perry the platypus

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  2. Julius CaesarApril 17, 2011 at 1:32 PM

    I like these haikus, esspecially the second one it has good word choice and imagery.
    -Dragontamer

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  3. Julius CaesarApril 24, 2011 at 5:09 PM

    The second haiku, I believe is the best of the 3. "Red blood stains our live" Awesome imagery, an impact to it.
    -TROLL

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  4. Julius CaesarApril 25, 2011 at 5:06 PM

    I believe these haikus are well written specially the second one since it covers Rome as a whole and the people who lived it giving imagery of what happened and how many people must have lost their lives in this tragedy. Good job!
    ~ Optimus Prime

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  5. Julius CaesarApril 26, 2011 at 11:00 AM

    The first haiku is my favorite.

    --asdfghjkl

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